Comments on: Just Saying http://mindofwinter.org/2005/07/27/just-saying/ A forum for discussing poems and poetry Wed, 07 Jan 2009 18:03:12 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.2.1 By: Ethan http://mindofwinter.org/2005/07/27/just-saying/#comment-391 Ethan Fri, 05 Aug 2005 15:51:08 +0000 http://mindofwinter.org/2005/07/27/just-saying/#comment-391 Brian, that reminds me of the old Windows haikus (http://ushostnet.com/host/windows.htm), such as: Windows NT crashed. I am the Blue Screen of Death. No one hears your screams. And it reminds me of an email I recently sent my girlfriend that was a perfectly mundane email in the form of 4 haiku poems. Despite the odd formating, she did not seem to notice. I was torn between happiness at the smoothness of my poems, on the one hand, and the lack of attention to my brilliance by my girlfriend, on the other. Brian, that reminds me of the old Windows haikus (http://ushostnet.com/host/windows.htm), such as:

Windows NT crashed.
I am the Blue Screen of Death.
No one hears your screams.

And it reminds me of an email I recently sent my girlfriend that was a perfectly mundane email in the form of 4 haiku poems. Despite the odd formating, she did not seem to notice. I was torn between happiness at the smoothness of my poems, on the one hand, and the lack of attention to my brilliance by my girlfriend, on the other.

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